This is great! See, you made it actually feel 3D. Most people who are inexperienced at drawing do it very "flat". I like that you didn't leave an outline around the eye, that'd also be a beginner thing. (which you are not, that's my point)
Your eye is pretty (Wether THIS one is actually yours or not, I still think so )
thank you very much !!! i did.... i made it 3D! AWESOME! I do draw things 3D but not very much and i do them as sketches for designs but thanks !!! I so happy u noticed! wow ur the only person who actually gave real feedback on this drawing. thanks again!